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 about_: the first change I to You  __ it reads better  that way as the I is always or often  a burden in a sentence  or two


 blogs are not chronological  in this project      nor are writings which sending this way that and th'other switch around

    a witch's broom zooming zig zagging this way an that the desert Loom!

    like  a rare boon    

 you have pushed  the text to a limit level,

a reckoning out of B, A, and C cracking out the rigging what held  things in place,

  not sure  a sure fire thing,

           but a fatal veil un lifted by the whacky water,