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blogs are not chronological in this project nor are writings which sending this way that and th'other switch around
a witch's broom zooming zig zagging this way an that the desert Loom!
like a rare boon
you have pushed the text to a limit level,
a reckoning out of B, A, and C cracking out the rigging what held things in place,
not sure a sure fire thing,
but a fatal veil un lifted by the whacky water,